Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Here's that book idea I said something about in my last post! Tell me, honestly, what you think. Comment questions if you have them as well! You have no clue how helpful those are to me :)

The synthetic air that the goverment deployes send everyone who breathes it in to a hallucination-like state, making the world around them seem to be perfect. The bottled emotions just make it worse. 

Vienna Bex is one of the dwindling Awares.  She has to smuggle goods to keep her and ones like her alive. She sees the world as it really is- quickly swirling into chaos. 

Can she, along with her ragtag group of outcasts, save the UnAwares before it's too late?


E.C. 
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  1. againstthetimesApril 19, 2016 at 4:46 PM

    I like it! :) Simple, but to the point and different but you can see sort of where it might stem from reality and stuff.
    I'm just sort of wondering, since I can be a stickler about "science" and details and background stuff, are you gonna explain how the synthetic air works? And why it was created and all that back story? Or just jump into the story without much detail and just go with it? Not that that's a bad thing, just wondering.
    Also, I like the character's name, its different but not totally weird and unpronounceable.
    Can't wait to hear more!! :D

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    1. E.C. ElliotApril 19, 2016 at 4:51 PM

      Hi againstthetimes! Thank you for commenting :D I haven't quite figured out how to yet but yes, I will explain how the air works :)

      And backstory to it.... Yeah, that would probably be a good thing to think about XD

      Thank you for your questions and ️Yay i'm glad you like it! Naming characters is one of my favourite things to do. Some of the names of other main characters in the book are Saxon, Hara, and Reece.

      E. C.

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    2. againstthetimesApril 22, 2016 at 1:57 PM

      I like the name Saxon, that's cool, very Anglo- Saxon XP And Hara is a Korean name; there was a member of Kara, her name is Goo HaRa. And Reece... I knew a Reece... He was... interesting XD
      But, yeah, can't wait to hear more! :D

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    3. E.C. ElliotApril 22, 2016 at 2:18 PM

      Okay so I didn't even know that about Hara. The character that has that name is Korean. XDDDDD Thank you againstthetimes!<3

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    4. againstthetimesApril 23, 2016 at 9:37 PM

      LOL!!!! That's so funny! I love when funny, coincidental things happen like that! XD
      Feel free to check out KARA's music too. They officially disbanded earlier this year, but they were around since like 2008. My personal favs are "Lupin", "Pandora", "Mamma Mia", "Cupid" and "Step".

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  2. UnknownApril 19, 2016 at 7:16 PM

    Sounds awesome, Emily! Do you have a board on Pinterest for it?

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  3. E.C. ElliotMay 22, 2016 at 11:56 AM

    EC you idiot there's no 'e' in deploys

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